Post by lacroix on Nov 6, 2016 4:33:06 GMT
SCORCHSTAR of RIVERCLAN
Tom
36 moons
RiverClan
Leader
black & white pelt with orange eyes
Mysterious
APPEARANCE
Scorchriddle's pelt is pitch black, very well for camouflage in the dark, it's practically hard to see him unless you take notice of his pure white throat and neck and his standing-out orange eyes. Scorchriddle is a rather large tom, massive indeed. His claws are long and sharp as well.
PERSONALITY
Scorchriddle is not the most positive feline around, but he does have at least three positive traits about him. Scorchriddle is rather capable of doing almost anything asked too, he'll do it on first notice as well. He's also a very intelligent tom, and won't fall for any stupid tricks, easy catching onto stuff/plans like that. The large tomcat is extremely honest and absolutely cannot tell a lie, being honest.
Scorchriddle is rather quiet, never speaking unless spoken to first. He also only speaks when speaking to outsiders, other than that he will never talk. The other bad part is, Scorchriddle is not very emotional, being unemotional, never showing his emotion, acutally he does, but rarely. He usually only shows anger and his strange grins/smirks.
Scorchriddle's negative traits is mostly for his suffix, riddle. Scorchriddle is rather mysterious and secretive, never really telling his plans. His mysteriousness comes from his actions and quietness. making him seem that way as he is. Secretly, the tom is ambitious and greedy, wanting everything to himself, to rule everyone. However, for now he plans to play smart. Scorchriddle isn't only these four traits, there's much more, he's also murderous and hostile. He will murder anyone and anything without mercy, always willing to do so when ordered.
Scorchriddle is rather quiet, never speaking unless spoken to first. He also only speaks when speaking to outsiders, other than that he will never talk. The other bad part is, Scorchriddle is not very emotional, being unemotional, never showing his emotion, acutally he does, but rarely. He usually only shows anger and his strange grins/smirks.
Scorchriddle's negative traits is mostly for his suffix, riddle. Scorchriddle is rather mysterious and secretive, never really telling his plans. His mysteriousness comes from his actions and quietness. making him seem that way as he is. Secretly, the tom is ambitious and greedy, wanting everything to himself, to rule everyone. However, for now he plans to play smart. Scorchriddle isn't only these four traits, there's much more, he's also murderous and hostile. He will murder anyone and anything without mercy, always willing to do so when ordered.
HISTORY
kit:
Scorchkit was born to Whitethorn and Ivycreek with two siblings, two brothers, The youngest was Lastkit, middle was Stumpykit, and the oldest was Scorchkit. However, Scorchkit used to be the friendliest of them all until his own father and mother practically tried to abandon Scorchkit because of too friendly he was. He was more of a ThunderClan cat. That worried his parents.
Apprentice:
Scorchpaw soon grew out of his overly friendly days and went onto a friendly yet abrasive apprentice. He'd changed enough to be a ShadowClan cat. Scorchpaw was mentored by a fierce yet childish she-cat with the name of Dynamicclaw. Scorchpaw had always liked training with Dynamicclaw, soon came the RiverClan vs ShadowClan and Windclan battle though. The first cat to be attacked was Dynamicclaw. Scorchpaw had fought bravely, taking all the skill she was taught by Dynamicclaw into battle. Her skill was impressive at the age of twelve moons. He was mostly aiming for apprentices to fight in the battle, also sometimes scaring off warriors. He was an amazing fighter and an okay climber. The climbing had given him advantages, along with his weight as well.
After the battle, the clan sadly lost their courageous, powerful, blood-thirsty leader Hawkstar. Blizzardpaw found (first leader) an amazing leader and admired him. He may have been greedy and negative but he was a good cat. He never showed it though. (next leader) was the next made leader of RiverClan. During this battle, Lastpaw was also killed.
Warrior:
Scorchriddle was given his warrior name. Scorchriddle's attacks were powerful since he mostly used his weight to his avantages which enables him to get the powerful strikes he can get out of himself. Scorchriddle soon grew older and his brother became his rival since Stumpypad was always trying to be so bossy and snappy towards Scorchriddle. At one point, He snapped and led Stumpypad to the creek where Aspenpaw's sister had died. The rushing water was just enough to drown Stumpypad. Scorchriddle pinned his brother, bit down onto his throat, and shoved him into the river. After that, Scorchriddle was a new cat.
Scorchriddle somewhat was angered by the leader's decision in who he chose as deputy who'd been Stormmist. It seemed to be a dangerous choice but Scorchriddle kept quiet and soon agreed to the leader's decision.
however, Scorchriddle eventually was given an apprentice by the name of Zincpaw. Blizzard strike wasn't very easy with him, in fact, cold and strict. He wanted his apprentice to be strong and an amazing fighter in battles just like he was. Scorchriddle would mostly focus on fighting & climbing with his apprentice. Soon, rogues attacked the camp and Zincpaw fought bravely like Scorchriddle had taught him and was soon given the name Zincpaw. Scorchriddle was proud of himself.
Deputy:
There wasn't much to his life after becoming deputy, however, before the former leader died, their deputy died first during a battle. So, therefore, Scorchriddle was chosen as deputy, by surprise, he didn't think he'd become a deputy as some cats didn't trust his ways. Scorchriddle kept himself calm, obeying his leader until he were to die. After the leader past, Scorchriddle became Scorchstar.
Leader:
Scorchstar isn't too bad, he may seem mysterious and murderous, but in his clan he is very trustworthy. Other cats, it's different. Scorchstar has many plans awaiting ahead of him that most may or may not see coming.
Scorchkit was born to Whitethorn and Ivycreek with two siblings, two brothers, The youngest was Lastkit, middle was Stumpykit, and the oldest was Scorchkit. However, Scorchkit used to be the friendliest of them all until his own father and mother practically tried to abandon Scorchkit because of too friendly he was. He was more of a ThunderClan cat. That worried his parents.
Apprentice:
Scorchpaw soon grew out of his overly friendly days and went onto a friendly yet abrasive apprentice. He'd changed enough to be a ShadowClan cat. Scorchpaw was mentored by a fierce yet childish she-cat with the name of Dynamicclaw. Scorchpaw had always liked training with Dynamicclaw, soon came the RiverClan vs ShadowClan and Windclan battle though. The first cat to be attacked was Dynamicclaw. Scorchpaw had fought bravely, taking all the skill she was taught by Dynamicclaw into battle. Her skill was impressive at the age of twelve moons. He was mostly aiming for apprentices to fight in the battle, also sometimes scaring off warriors. He was an amazing fighter and an okay climber. The climbing had given him advantages, along with his weight as well.
After the battle, the clan sadly lost their courageous, powerful, blood-thirsty leader Hawkstar. Blizzardpaw found (first leader) an amazing leader and admired him. He may have been greedy and negative but he was a good cat. He never showed it though. (next leader) was the next made leader of RiverClan. During this battle, Lastpaw was also killed.
Warrior:
Scorchriddle was given his warrior name. Scorchriddle's attacks were powerful since he mostly used his weight to his avantages which enables him to get the powerful strikes he can get out of himself. Scorchriddle soon grew older and his brother became his rival since Stumpypad was always trying to be so bossy and snappy towards Scorchriddle. At one point, He snapped and led Stumpypad to the creek where Aspenpaw's sister had died. The rushing water was just enough to drown Stumpypad. Scorchriddle pinned his brother, bit down onto his throat, and shoved him into the river. After that, Scorchriddle was a new cat.
Scorchriddle somewhat was angered by the leader's decision in who he chose as deputy who'd been Stormmist. It seemed to be a dangerous choice but Scorchriddle kept quiet and soon agreed to the leader's decision.
however, Scorchriddle eventually was given an apprentice by the name of Zincpaw. Blizzard strike wasn't very easy with him, in fact, cold and strict. He wanted his apprentice to be strong and an amazing fighter in battles just like he was. Scorchriddle would mostly focus on fighting & climbing with his apprentice. Soon, rogues attacked the camp and Zincpaw fought bravely like Scorchriddle had taught him and was soon given the name Zincpaw. Scorchriddle was proud of himself.
Deputy:
There wasn't much to his life after becoming deputy, however, before the former leader died, their deputy died first during a battle. So, therefore, Scorchriddle was chosen as deputy, by surprise, he didn't think he'd become a deputy as some cats didn't trust his ways. Scorchriddle kept himself calm, obeying his leader until he were to die. After the leader past, Scorchriddle became Scorchstar.
Leader:
Scorchstar isn't too bad, he may seem mysterious and murderous, but in his clan he is very trustworthy. Other cats, it's different. Scorchstar has many plans awaiting ahead of him that most may or may not see coming.
