Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 15:03:03 GMT
TALONFOOT of THUNDERCLAN
MALE
30
THUDERCLAN
WARRIOR
BROWN TABBY, AMBER
PRIDEFUL
APPEARANCE
Talonfoot is a fairly large tom with a lean build, tall with broad shoulders and wide frame. His fur is brown with darker stripes and several white patches on his chin, chest, stomach, paws, and tail tip. His ears are completely black, as well as the stripe running down his spine that goes from the base of his neck to the base of his tail. His eyes are a dull amber, set neatly above his nose which is a redish pink. His claws are long and his paws are large, which earned him his name as a kit and as a warrior. He has a scar over his right eye from a nasty fight with a rival cat, and a scar on his back from another battle he fought in.
PERSONALITY
Talonfoot is more than often a very laid back character. He assesses every situation calmly and thinks thoroughly before speaking or acting. He is slow to anger and very easy to get along with, assuming you're not from another clan. He puts his clan first and is a strong believer of StarClan, and the warrior code. He is very prideful and enjoys being looked up to by the younger clan's members. He believes that respect is earned, through words and actions, though it isn't easy to gain his respect if you are younger or he has reason to distrust you. While he usually puts others first, he can be very stubborn with what he thinks is right. If he believes that a fight should happen, then he will very well voice his opinion no matter if everyone else agrees or not. This tom isn't afraid to take a stand for what he firmly holds as true and right. This stubbornness and pride brings about the flaws in his personality, as he hates outsiders firmly and would rather fight before asking any questions or listening to both sides of a story.
HISTORY
Talonfoot was born into ThunderClan through a father with the same personality as his, and a mother who was sweet ad caring. He was the only kit in his litter, because he was a late birth, born early in Leaf-Bare. He was large at birth, though not healthy. He was problems breathing and refused to nurse. With effort, however, he made it through his first few days and slowly made his way into being a healthy kit after the first half-moon. He had been named late, since his parents were unsure if he would survive or not, though once he was named he was named after his claws that had been visible from birth, "Talonkit." He didn't get along well with every one in the nursery, due to the fact the played rough and refused to ever be a "Bad guy" while playing pretend. Those who he did get along with he treated as if they were his loyal subjects, always pretending that he was their leader and showing them the path to perfect clan life.
As an apprentice, Talonpaw was given to his father to be mentored, a request that his mother had asked for, and did very well with his training. He was better at fighting than hunting, but none the less he worked hard in both areas and developed into a fine trainee of the warrior ways. He took the warrior code to heart and listened to all advice given to him by the older warriors, looking up to them in awe whenever he got to see them in action. He often would teach a few basic moves to the older kits who weren't too far away from their own apprentice ceremonies, or aid other apprentices when they were having trouble with a move or technique. He didn't enjoy apprentice duties like helping the elders with removing their ticks, but he never once complained and always was kind with the grumpy elders or nursery queens.
Talonpaw got into his first battle as an apprentice, after he had taken his warrior assessment. He was on patrol with two warriors and a loner had been hunting in their land. Young Talonpaw jumped into action without waiting for orders or a cue, attacking the loner and fighting viciously against the intruder. He had won, though he intruder had left a nasty scar on his back and another on his nose, which the other two warriors had helped him back to camp to get treated and cleaned. He was warned not to act again without waiting for a signal, but also praised for being able to defeat a grown cat in battle. He was very soon made a warrior and named again after his large claws, "Talonfoot."
Talonfoot is a very brave and hardy warrior, and will continue to be so. Battle after battle he will fight till his last breath to ensure safety to his clan and all of his clan mates.
As an apprentice, Talonpaw was given to his father to be mentored, a request that his mother had asked for, and did very well with his training. He was better at fighting than hunting, but none the less he worked hard in both areas and developed into a fine trainee of the warrior ways. He took the warrior code to heart and listened to all advice given to him by the older warriors, looking up to them in awe whenever he got to see them in action. He often would teach a few basic moves to the older kits who weren't too far away from their own apprentice ceremonies, or aid other apprentices when they were having trouble with a move or technique. He didn't enjoy apprentice duties like helping the elders with removing their ticks, but he never once complained and always was kind with the grumpy elders or nursery queens.
Talonpaw got into his first battle as an apprentice, after he had taken his warrior assessment. He was on patrol with two warriors and a loner had been hunting in their land. Young Talonpaw jumped into action without waiting for orders or a cue, attacking the loner and fighting viciously against the intruder. He had won, though he intruder had left a nasty scar on his back and another on his nose, which the other two warriors had helped him back to camp to get treated and cleaned. He was warned not to act again without waiting for a signal, but also praised for being able to defeat a grown cat in battle. He was very soon made a warrior and named again after his large claws, "Talonfoot."
Talonfoot is a very brave and hardy warrior, and will continue to be so. Battle after battle he will fight till his last breath to ensure safety to his clan and all of his clan mates.
